Rin 6 Years after

Uh - way off. Especially the hair - did you re-read the description? You know the anime character design where the character has long full hair bound with something wide near the end? Think something like that, but length to the middle of the back, and the fastening is narrower and parallel with the middle of her neck. Isn't her hair straight? It wouldn't wave and spread out like that, it would hand down the middle. No bangs whatsoever, no hair hanging in front period in fact.

The clothes are very 'anime uniform.' Especially the boots - it's been a while, maybe reread all our conversations on how she and others would look? And maybe I should send you the discussions I had with Kobayashi on it. If it has a 'dress up' feel, it's wrong. I'm looking for clothes a person would conceivably get at the store, not something that looks like it came from a cosplay magazine or the Magical Girl's Academy mail order catalog (off campus in style!). I'll send you a note with the discussions I had with Kobayashi - we had some very in depth ones on Rin, for all she still had trouble.